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Allen reviews what slow reading of the Declaration has already revealed and what work is ahead. The Declaration offers us a frank view of how difficult and yet important it is for humans to make decisions about their future and their government. The next sentence “connects equality to judgment” and argues that judgments about government are key to how humans shape their present and future (145).
As she reintroduces the Declaration’s famous second sentence about the equality of all men, Allen wonders if it is a “bad thing” that most readers only know certain parts, or “sound bites” (147). Allen suggests that all words, no matter how brief, offer insight into the opinions and principles of the speaker. This requires both that politicians be effective and clear communicators and that audiences be careful readers and listeners. As Allen writes, “The value of learning to read slowly and listen closely is not merely that we will understand the Declaration better, but that we will understand every politician better” (150).
To understand the Declaration’s claims about equality, Allen considers exactly how many “truths” the work and its authors consider “self-evident.” To arrive at her final tally, Allen relies on the Declaration’s final versions rather than its drafts. The punctuation there reduces the number of truths to three types: “truths about human beings […] about government […] about the right to revolution” (153). The first sentence explains that all people have equal rights from a creator. Government is the primary means for securing these rights, and people have a right to overthrow governments when they fail.
Allen admits that the use of the word “men” in this sentence has been the subject of much debate, not only for her personally but many others. Does its use mean the Declaration is truly for everyone? To answer this, Allen turns to a deleted passage from Jefferson’s draft: the passage on slavery. In this deleted section, Jefferson describes Africans as “men” whose rights have been violated. So, when he says that “all men are created equal” (154), he must have truly meant it. Jefferson’s life brings out this contradiction: He was an enslaver, freed few of his enslaved laborers upon his death, and had children with one of those laborers, Sally Hemings. How can we reconcile this contradiction? Do those words have meaning if we take on the perspective of an enslaved person in 1776?
Allen admits that Jefferson’s status as an enslaver and the fact that the Declaration explicitly excludes Indigenous Americans make it difficult to embrace her arguments about equality and the capacity of every person to engage in moral judgment. Jefferson benefited on many levels from enslaving Black Americans, but this only partly explains how he could write one way and live another. The Declaration encourages us to form judgments based on reason and logic. However, humans also form opinions based on their environments—including environments that justified slavery and the subjugation of women. These environments form our habits, and such habits are difficult to relinquish. American history demonstrates this since George III only recognized the US’s independence due to military defeat, and the same process ended slavery in the United States. Allen argues that words matter because they provide a basis for eventual changes of habit, “tensions” on which future generations can build.
In this section, Allen turns to questions of how context informs reading. Is it necessary to read and memorize all of the “all men are created equal” sentence to be a true reader of the Declaration, given that politicians use only a few words? Does Jefferson’s commitment to equality matter given that he lived his life as a comfortable enslaver? In the first case, Allen answers in the negative. All words, no matter how brief, contain the values of their authors if one reads closely and attentively, which further underscores Allen’s claims about The Transformational Power of Language.
Of course, this does not mean Allen sees no value in a more comprehensive reading. Indeed, she suggests that to fully see what the Declaration argues, we must know that its punctuation changed from version to version and then analyze the effect of the changes. The result offers us a deeper understanding of the Declaration as a memo, as once we understand its arguments about human beings and about government, we understand why the colonists rebelled.
Allen reaffirms her commitment to reading with care when she points out that Jefferson originally included Africans in his discussion of rights. In this instance, his vision of equality was universal and not limited to his own race, gender, or class. However, political values may not line up with lived realities. In one sense, this underscores Allen’s emphasis on a democratic reading of the Declaration: Jefferson’s life may be particularly historically significant, but in some ways, it is not unique, as all people struggle to make their lives match their principles (an idea that is central to the theme of Optimism and Pessimism About Humanity).
Allen ties this struggle to balance actions and ideals to both the American Revolution and the Civil War, suggesting that imbalances between the two are what drive historical change. Allen’s optimism and pessimism about humanity, like those of the Declaration’s writers, are therefore in some sense not in tension at all, as it is the very gap between them that allows for progress. Likewise, the document matters not because of Jefferson’s moral standing or its perfect correspondence with reality but because it offers a list of principles and a moral foundation for improvement.